
The gray clouds of foggy mind
swished around its corners,
where I tied up all the messes
to an unbending pendulum
that which tends to lose
all its rigour now, today.
From the murky mind,
the messes bounced in
through an unseen byway
to get crushed among
the frenzied breathe I take.
And now, my breathe,
like the slowest turn of Venus,
spinned around an axis
of futile tranquility.
I can see the darkest clouds,
suffocating from the throat of sky,
sharing my selfsame state.
Neither of us could breathe,
that breathe has been prisoned
by the hurdles of life.
Somewhere from an edge
my still sanguine heart kept
on saying…. Breathe..
Image Credits: Unsplash@Fabian Moller
Thank you:)
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I love the imagery! Nice poem!
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🤗❤️
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Beautiful write up ❣️👍
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Thanks
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Well penned
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Thank you
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You’re welcome..keep writing good stuff.
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Thanks, I will!😊
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🥰
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Hypothetical reality!!😀😀
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You said it!!😄
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Love it!!
I have a poem just like this one haha, called Mindfulness :))
Serendipity, I guess 🙂
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Is it??? Let me check it now then 🥰
And glad that u loved this one🤗❤️
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Haha, yep! Thank you 🙂 I did!!!
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Thank you🦋
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Amazing imaginery & beautiful work!👏
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